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= The Day I Walked Past This = House! (Imren Sentip) // The sun shined on me as I was trying to grab my cat that I had found in an old, rust hole. My cats name is Ginger. I named her that because she looks like a gingerbread man. (Just joking.) // // As I was running, I tipped over an old, yuck and warm water on my shoe! It was disgusting! I had old water on my shoe! All of a sudden, I realized that I had forgotten about my cat! Just because I was worried over my wet shoe, I had just lost my cat! I was so angry, tired, bored and sad! // // I turned away and looked at this old house. It had a broken roof; wood pieces everywhere and obviously no one had lived there for ages. I decided to go in and look around because I was so interested in this house. I was trying to walk slowly and without making noise but I couldn’t because every time I took a step, it would make a “ccccccrrrrraaaacccckkkk!” noise. // // By the time I got in, I could see a bench with a photo of a man and a women-hugging each other. I got scared and walked out of the house but did not look where I was going. I had fallen into a whole that had wood pieces all over it. I was petrified. // // I was stuck for about three hours now and I started to scream as loud as I can. I knew no one could hear me. My leg was starting to hurt and it was so num. I was stuck to the right side of my body. It was so uncomfortable! I was lying there, thinking about my little brother and how he would cope without me. No food, no parents, he’s gone. // // I was stuck there for another two hours when all of a sudden I heard a little voice call out saying “ Mmoooonnnniiiiccccaaa!” I was getting excited because I could hear my brother looking for me. I screamed out saying “ Mmmaaaaxxxx!” He came looking for me in a hole that I could barely fit in. “What are you doing here?” “It’s a long story, just please get me out of here please.” “ But how?” “ I don’t know!” I replied. // // By the time Max got me out, I checked if I could still walk. I could but I just have to rest for a bit. “I love you so much Max, you saved me, I was worried about you!” “ Maxy I will never leave you alone even if I had to!!” “Actually, where’s Ginger?” “Ohhh…well that’s another story.” // The End!